The harsh shadows


Wisdom is not harsh
it does not shout
berate or equivocate
in the shadows
of foolishness –
instead
it stands tall
and empowers
those who were formerly
relegated to
the dark confines
of ignorance.

I’ve surmised
that choosing
to follow ignorance
is a segue
to our swirling waters
of our demise.

At the water’s edge.


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2 Comments

  1. I liked the style of your poem. I don’t know if I read too much into it, but I felt like there were many scripture tie-ins that were very creative. The first example being the title alluding to phillipians 2:10 (at the name of Jesus, every knee shall bow). With the fear of the lord being the the beginning of wisdom, it fits perfectly with the subject of the the poem. Style-wise, your first stanza is reminiscent of Paul’s description of love in 1 Corinthians 13 which was a nice touch. I also think your “swirling waters” is an excellent multifaceted metaphor for ignorance. The first reason being that it not appear as immediately destructive but more of a gradual decline. The second is that one might not know in the beginning that they are in such a whirlpool. Lastly, when they do realize it, like being trapped in a vortex, it is very difficult to get out of such faulty thinking patterns. Thank you for sharing this.

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    1. Wojciech, fascinating insight, I appreciate the echo, feel free to echo some more.

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